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Student Essay #8 Inspirational Essay

“No one is going to hand me success. I must go out & get it myself. That’s why I’m here. To dominate. To conquer. Both the world, and myself.” – Unknown

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This quote describes me a lot because “no one is going to hand me success I have to get it myself”. I have to get up and achieve my greatness. Receiving success means you don’t go out and find it you go out and earn it. It’s not going to show up at your door and deliver it to you. Success is so fragile and so delicate it’s like a glass vase.

Success is an amazing gift you soon receive when you achieve it. The way I start my day to success is to say “today is a step closer to finding my key to life. I get my education and then I play soccer a real stress reliever once you step on that field your mind goes into the game and your mind goes at ease. Once you step off the field you’re relaxed and you feel great because you worked your body and your mind. That how I find my success.

The reason I’m here is achieve success and to prove something in this world and to find my key to my life “good things come to the people that go out achieve. “ I’m here for a reason and to conquer the obstacles that are put in my way in life. To overcome and to overpower the strength I have in life to reach what I’ve been searching for. To be here is to prove to someone and to yourself that you can be somebody and be successful in the life you only live once so why not live your life to the fullest everything day.

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Student #7 Inspirational Essay

Good things come to those who wait. Greater things come to those who get off their ass off and do anything to happen.

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This quote goes out to people like me. Good things come to me when I wait and greater things come to me when I work hard for the stuffs I want. Dreams are what lead a person to happiness. They are the golden thoughts of our minds that inspire us to life full of excitement.

 

This is the way I live, and it inspires me to see others continuing to motivate me to say true to that path. Everyone has a dream but my dream is to work hard for the things I want and make it happen. That’s why I work hard for things I want. My dream is also to follow the goodness that surrounds us in life and share the goodness exponentially with the world to help inspire others.

 

Everyone has a dream but there all different. My dream is to do my own things like work hard for the stuffs I want and make it happen. In school I’m trying to do my best to do everything right like, do well in school and get good grades. I’m trying to accomplish things for myself so I come to school every day. I’m trying my best to get my grades up.

 

I don’t like waiting that long but if I have to then I will because it says good things come to those who wait. That’s exactly what I do wait. I believe that there is always something you can do to take a step, even the smallest step, towards the dream each day. Good things come to those who wait but greater things come to those who get their ass and do anything to make it happen. In final, it’s not excuses you make in life that determine the final reckoning of a dream, it’s the steps you take.

Student 5 Essay

“Good things come to those who wait… greater things come to those who get off their ass and do anything to make it happen.” 

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This quote caught my attention because, people always say that good things will come to those who will wait. But in reality better things will come to those people that will make it happen! not just wait for it to come towards them. Waiting for good things to come to the ones who wait may happen , but those people don’t know when it will come to them .

This quote is good because, people will be dreaming for days about what will come to them in the future or even at the moment. They will not know what is coming for them if they don’t put effort on what there dreams are leading them too. Don’t wait for your goods to come to you go out there and accomplish them don’t let the laziness get you and not do anything to get where you want to be at.

I don’t wait for the good things that I want to come to me I always try to attempt to accomplish them before it comes to me . for example I registered to college for the summer already so I can start my career that I want , I didn’t want to wait for that time to come to me I wanted to take steeps ahead of me to do what I want to be in the future.

Last but not least I regret not trying to pass my classes and joining a club or sport. Because if I wouldv passed all my classes and joined a club I could’ve had all my credits and try ! to achieve what I wanted for my future and graduate from pv. Ever since then I learned my lesson to not wait for something good to come for you , go ahead! And do it. That’s why l choose this great quote.

Student 4 Essay

(If the people that’s are destroying this world aren’t taking a day off then why should I?)-Bob Marley I like this quote because it reminds me of my dad because it was by his favorite artist and he use to always tell me it, even on his worst day before he passed he still told me it. So basically it is what I live by, no days off 365 u have to think like that to make it in this crazy unfortunate life we live.

I’m the only man that my family so I have a lot of responsibility’s that at time I feel like giving up but if I didn’t stay strong nobody would. My mom is by herself now n she has nobody so of I gave up she would to and I wouldn’t want that. So this one reason that I do the things I do a daily bases.

Now I have to start to find a job and start providing for my mom so we can have a place to live and also food to eat. Also I have to step up when she needs something to do it for her so she will have it easier and less stress on her. Also I know if start I wouldn’t be able to get back from it So I guess what I’m trying to say is that if I took a day off id fall back to square off so why put myself in the passion by just avoiding it n trucking threw very day. And it keeps me saying and pushing myself every day so I guess it’s no days off.

Student 3

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‘Don’t be afraid to stand for what you believe in, even if that means standing alone’

 

I like that quote because to me my parents don’t want me to join the military or go to expensive college. If I don’t go to college I won’t get a great job. I want to go to college same time doing training for military they don’t want me to go because they don’t want me to die out in war or anything happens to me. They are scared but I want to do this I want to go I been talking about it since freshmen year my parents didn’t think that I will actually sign up for it.

 

The same time I am in military I will attend college. I want to do military for at least 4 years no more than that I want to come back try and start a family. I will go to college in military I want to do auto body on cars, clean out car, engine, interior, paint the car put it all together and don’t charge people more than the car does I will be cheap. That was my plan A plan B was going into military. I want to own my own body shop after military I have 2 plans after high school.

 

My parents don’t like my choice about military they are trying to get me out of it. I already made my choice. My brothers and sister even sad that I will go into military every time I talk about it to my family from out of town my brothers, parents, sister cry because they thought I wouldn’t go into military my family from out of town congratulates me but my own don’t that why I picked this quote i believe that I will try my best to come home safe I think that I am alone they won’t let me go don’t agree what I believe in to me I think m alone till my own family agrees with me.

 

Sometimes I have doubts in going into military because my uncle was in it for half of his life. He came back him and his best friend went in together station same branch my uncle and his friend were on their final tour my uncle car died didn’t turn on his friend was a block away he was on foot he was going to my uncle then there was gun fire my uncle got scared because of his friend he stop trying to start the hum-v then he saw his friend their injured on the ground his left leg was squirting blood. My uncle saved his friends life when the helicopter came and picked them up my uncle came back half their half here because he was traumatized from the blood he never seen that much he told me so I understand why my family don’t want me to go into military they think I will end up like my uncle.

 

Student 2

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“Life is short, live it. Love is rare, grab it. Anger is bad, dump it. Fear is awful, face it. Memories are sweet, cherish it.” – Unknown

Firstly, I chose this phrase because of its real meaning on life, as life is short not many people love it, and love is rare but many people let it slip through their fingers. With that being said the first two fragment sentences open-end my eyes as I realized for as much as I love life I have just as much hatred towards life. The love part I feel as if I grab it, but I barely feel warmth from it. I think this will help me in life to try my hardest to turn the bad to good out come so there’s nothing but love for life. Then with that hopefully I could really feel that real love.

Secondly, in this phrase it said “anger is bad, dump it”. This could go a long way if you can handle getting rid of your anger as for sum it is harder to drop the anger than keeping it. Because in everyone’s eyes life is different for that individual. With reading that fragment now I know that holding anger in is like not taking out the trash, its messy stinky gets in the way and just needs to be “dumped”!

Thirdly, “fear is awful, face it”. For some their fear keeps them from moving on in life. Then there’s toughs who face their fears every day. Fear is what you make of it but without fear what is life. Fear is how people build confidence and self-strength to do what you want in life. The biggest fear you have to fear though is yourself.

Finally, “memories are sweet, cherish it”. As unforgotten memories tend to be the best memories. Then some people have trouble living outside the past. I think everyone should be cherishing there memories as you can always look back but never look ahead. Memories don’t have to be the best of things in your life good memories are the times when you look back and remember yours or others happiness

Student 1

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“Life is short, live it. Love is rare, grab it. Anger is bad, dump it. Fear is awful, face it. Memories are sweet, cherish it.” – Unknown

Life is short so you have to live like there is no tomorrow. Make your life interesting by exploring new things in the world. Take today as if you might not see the sun light tomorrow. Life isn’t easy people have their struggles, you just need to learn how to pull yourself through them. Everyone has their ups and downs but what’s life without them. So live your life tell your last breath.

Love Is Rare, Once You Find It Grab It Before Someone Else Does. Love Is an Amazing Thing When You Find It. It Can Help Your Stress Thinking about Love Instead of what you were stressing over it relaxes you. Love is the key to happiness. I found my happiness. Love is when two come together and doesn’t let anything or anyone get in between them. Grab it hold it forever.

Anger is so bad it stops you from being happy. Don’t hold on to anger it makes you look bad nobody can hold a grudge forever life goes on. Life isn’t about always being mad or anger, it’s about being who you are and not letting anyone or anything ruin it. Dump your anger let it go it’s never worth holding.

Memories are sweet they have millions of reasons why. Memories stay with you for the rest of your life. I have so much memories that I will hold forever. The best memories are the ones that make you smile and be happy. When I thinking about the good times I just sit there and smile. Memories are sweet.

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