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“Life is short, live it. Love is rare, grab it. Anger is bad, dump it. Fear is awful, face it. Memories are sweet, cherish it.” – Unknown

Life is short so you have to live like there is no tomorrow. Make your life interesting by exploring new things in the world. Take today as if you might not see the sun light tomorrow. Life isn’t easy people have their struggles, you just need to learn how to pull yourself through them. Everyone has their ups and downs but what’s life without them. So live your life tell your last breath.

Love Is Rare, Once You Find It Grab It Before Someone Else Does. Love Is an Amazing Thing When You Find It. It Can Help Your Stress Thinking about Love Instead of what you were stressing over it relaxes you. Love is the key to happiness. I found my happiness. Love is when two come together and doesn’t let anything or anyone get in between them. Grab it hold it forever.

Anger is so bad it stops you from being happy. Don’t hold on to anger it makes you look bad nobody can hold a grudge forever life goes on. Life isn’t about always being mad or anger, it’s about being who you are and not letting anyone or anything ruin it. Dump your anger let it go it’s never worth holding.

Memories are sweet they have millions of reasons why. Memories stay with you for the rest of your life. I have so much memories that I will hold forever. The best memories are the ones that make you smile and be happy. When I thinking about the good times I just sit there and smile. Memories are sweet.

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